Thursday, December 20, 2007

Could not

It’s ego or disgust
stops further ahead
forcing one for indigent
one could not really sentient.

Arm’s urged for not to use
for love it touched another
smiles for seconds the feel
I could bring inside.

Cool the night
raindrops full day and night
tears in heart not comes out
who could justice even comes out.

Life with up and downs
sometimes like running rivers
could not reach up once it was flow
only to reach Ocean where humans invisible.

13 comments:

Jeevan said...

I wish you all a Happy Bakrith.

Kalyan said...

lovely words...you have crafted them beautifully...the words evoke so much feelings in it & in any relationship, they are just part of it, which I believe makes a relationship much more livelier & healthy...Have a nice festive season!

Alok said...

I could relate to it at so many levels ... a very emotive piece Jeevan and well done ...

Alok

krystyna said...

Hi Jeevan!
I love your poem, full of emotions!

Soon I'll start blogging and I'be try to be here more regular. Your posts are always great!
Thanks for your
Belated Birthday wishes!
But it is not late and I hope you'll come to my birthday party - 22 Dec.
May your day be beautiful and happy!

G U R U said...

Good one. Reminds me of this maxim -

"There's one sad truth in life I've found
While journeying east and west -
The only folks we really wound
Are those we love the best.
We flatter those we scarcely know,
We please the fleeting guest,
And deal full many a thoughtless blow
To those who love us best.
- Ella Wheeler Wilcox"

kalai said...

"Life with up and downs"

very true friend.. Happy Bakrith buddy....

Keshi said...

awesome Jeevan! u write too well!

MERRY CHRISTMAS MAN! :) See ya in 2008!

Keshi.

Ponnarasi Kothandaraman said...

Too good! Awesome writing!

tulipspeaks said...

good one.. happy holidays.


ammu.

Vinesh said...

what inspired you to write this, friend?

bharat chandran said...

"Life with up and downs
sometimes like running rivers
could not reach up once it was flow
only to reach Ocean where humans invisible." - Nice poem!

priya said...

If life is not ups and down, then we do not learn or experience anything in this world.

Shiva said...

Jeevan,

It was intense and profound. Each line of the poem hits the soul.

I feel, you are becoming a complex writer:)