You are the dear at my side
i see you there always, where
we play hide and seek
behind the large brumes
you never shyly like a new bride
whenever I bear you with me
in my tine camera
where it continues for tetra- months
It was the sign I dint thought
when u call me late night
i feel your coldness with me,
without know if it’s your trail or
douche I took before meeting you
i fond for your sight on water
after period likely eventide dawn
in very mild crimson sky down
# Current song was a lovely melody from Kadhal Desam (Love country). I felt this song suits this post, it has a wonderful picturesque of beautiful skies and water.
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15 comments:
Hi jeevan,
i have always loved the beach shore and i hav tried many times taking a nice snap there. this looks like a good one..
Love the poem and also the picture. I love the sea and also love to sit by the sea shore.
Very nice poem and pic..
dear poet,
anything interesting??
Nice post and picture Jeevan...
Can u say me the song lines... Sorry iam not getting it correctly...
saw her too :)
Lovely verse!
Keshi.
Lovely picture and you captured your words wonderful.
i love that photo!
ammu.
Hi Jeevan!
Beautifully writen! Your poem conveys your spiritual insights.
May your deep dreams come true!
beautiful words jeevan and an apt pic
alok
So did you get your lady Jeevan...The way you have crafted the words beautifully, I feel you have!
Very very nice words & the pic too!
Beautiful poem.
First time here. I'll be back.
Oh btw, I've lived in Chennai for 2 years.
Barbi – Thanks buddy. That too on the full moon day, the shore wonders!
Starry – Thanks dear :) we all love the shore is it.
Balar – Thank you friend :)
Ponniyinselvan – I had a outing, than nothing interesting ma.
Kalai – Thank you :) the song is Oh vennilla iru vaanila… from Kadhal Desam.
Keshi – Thanks dear :)
Priya – Thank you friend.
Ammu – thank you
Krystyna – Thank u so much dear :) u always inspire me.
Alok – Thanks buddy!
Kalyan - no buddy ;) Thank you!
Ash – Welcome here :) that’s nice to know u lived in Chennai. Thank u.
Thanks Jeevan. I guessed it correctly. I thought that was a sad melody love song. Suits well...
in one word "lovely" :)
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