Friday, October 26, 2007

Season (re)turn

Fortuitous season comes down
my doors and windows are open
to new monsoon breeze to enter
to recapture mood in delightful, way
I liked the morning drizzling
the white dark clouds, sun shines
in intervals of the season

Parrot, crow, browned birdies
orange, yellow butterflies
they flies near my place
more greener than before breakdown
growing assertively after human victory
the plants rise from my daily sight

What a feel, freshly fills the will
harder thunders try to stop
this is the time to walk
waters stayed in streets, step down
I will play in streets, which could stop
I am not the only person in this stop

**Current song is Love at sight. It was the situation of the song, a sweetest music.

9 comments:

priya said...

That was nice and the last ones went with good rhyming.

kalai said...

"Parrot, crow, browned birdies
orange, yellow butterflies
they flies near my place
more greener than before"

"What a feel, freshly fills the will
harder thunders try to stop
this is the time to walk
waters stayed in streets"

nice feel buddy. u made me as if i was playing in the rain which is in the movie "Minnale" & u remained me abot the music....

krystyna said...

Much than beautiful, Jeevan!

Have a Great Sunday!

Ghost Particle said...

bro...a nice poem...loved the words that describe the present day and situation...marvelous nanba. had the feeling of just being free...

Itz me!!! said...

too good!!!

Deepa said...

Dazzling rays
…cuts across drizzling drops
Vibrant colors
….emerges along drizzling path
Seasons turn
….to straighten our twisted thoughts
Seasons return
….to remind us on forgotten thoughts

starry nights said...

loved your description Jeevan.You are quite a good poet.

Keshi said...

beautiful Jeevan!

Keshi.

Jeevan said...

Priya – Thank you buddy.

Kalai – Thank you friend, glad u like both the song and my post. Have a good time on rains:)

Krystyna – Thank you dear. hope u are doing fine.

GP – Thank you so much nanba. I feel free to express it here.

Its me – you are welcome :)

Deepa - wow that’s reality!! “Vibrant colors
….emerges along drizzling path” exceed.

Starry – Thank you dear :)

Keshi – Thank you.