A bamboo hut
on top of wood, and
palm leaves tie wrap
the uncertain awe
among not yet civilized
The dreams yet wild
disclose to sky, and
tap against the bushes
in lag endanger species
to cause under raw
Let me live in the hut
in mid rich rain forest
one night to fall asleep
on Mother Nature’s lap, to
let birds and indigenous lullaby.
on top of wood, and
palm leaves tie wrap
the uncertain awe
among not yet civilized
The dreams yet wild
disclose to sky, and
tap against the bushes
in lag endanger species
to cause under raw
Let me live in the hut
in mid rich rain forest
one night to fall asleep
on Mother Nature’s lap, to
let birds and indigenous lullaby.
11 comments:
Just lovely thought and lines, Jeevan..
I have only once seen a tree top hut and so much wanted to live there :)
refreshing one, Jeevan
wishes,
devika
the uncertain awe
among not yet civilized
Loved that line
and
Nothing is as healing and as soothing as sleeping in Mother Nature's lap!!!
The last few lines were amazing. Beautiful.
It is my dream too, Jeevan.
Beautiful and how timely.
We need to return to Mather Nature.
Thank you for amazing photo too.
dear Jeevan,
it's not an exaggeration or flattery if i tell you that i too have the same wish and feel one with you.
simply touching.
i too long for that eternal lullaby.
May my wish be fulfilled soon.
karthik+amma
:)
very well expressed..the bamboo hut looks quite inviting..simple pleasures in life..may u get them fulfilled
Devika – Thank you dear. Living always under concrete roof, that a great opportunity if we got to stay there.
The Seeker – you are exactly bro. Thank you :)
Priya – Thank you.
Krystyna – Thanks dear. and also we have see her (mother nature) from our similarities destruction.
Ponniyinselvan – Thank you, may your wish fulfill soon ma :)
Vishesh – all the best to ur exams :)
Lakshmi – Thank you buddy.
"one night to fall asleep
on Mother Nature’s lap, to
let birds and indigenous lullaby."
beautiful lines Brother...
happy blogging
Guess you love poem too much. :)
Thanks Prema and humanobserver :)
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