Wednesday, February 25, 2009

Wild hut

Wild hut
A bamboo hut
on top of wood, and
palm leaves tie wrap
the uncertain awe
among not yet civilized

The dreams yet wild
disclose to sky, and
tap against the bushes
in lag endanger species
to cause under raw

Let me live in the hut
in mid rich rain forest
one night to fall asleep
on Mother Nature’s lap, to
let birds and indigenous lullaby.


Devika Jyothi said...

Just lovely thought and lines, Jeevan..

I have only once seen a tree top hut and so much wanted to live there :)

refreshing one, Jeevan


The Seeker said...

the uncertain awe
among not yet civilized

Loved that line

Nothing is as healing and as soothing as sleeping in Mother Nature's lap!!!

Priya said...

The last few lines were amazing. Beautiful.

krystyna said...

It is my dream too, Jeevan.
Beautiful and how timely.
We need to return to Mather Nature.

Thank you for amazing photo too.

Ponniyinselvan/karthikeyan said...

dear Jeevan,
it's not an exaggeration or flattery if i tell you that i too have the same wish and feel one with you.
simply touching.
i too long for that eternal lullaby.
May my wish be fulfilled soon.

Vishesh said...


Lakshmi said...

very well expressed..the bamboo hut looks quite inviting..simple pleasures in life..may u get them fulfilled

Jeevan said...

Devika – Thank you dear. Living always under concrete roof, that a great opportunity if we got to stay there.

The Seeker – you are exactly bro. Thank you :)

Priya – Thank you.

Krystyna – Thanks dear. and also we have see her (mother nature) from our similarities destruction.

Ponniyinselvan – Thank you, may your wish fulfill soon ma :)

Vishesh – all the best to ur exams :)

Lakshmi – Thank you buddy.

Resonator said...

"one night to fall asleep
on Mother Nature’s lap, to
let birds and indigenous lullaby."

beautiful lines Brother...

happy blogging

humanobserver said...

Guess you love poem too much. :)

Jeevan said...

Thanks Prema and humanobserver :)